All Comments on 'Seduction'

by mcdonng

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hindsight2020hindsight2020over 13 years ago
wrong category.

Just mentioning they have other partners does not make it loving wives. You have to make it part of the story. Erotic Couplings might be more accurate. In that category it would be a well done.

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 8 years ago
Second Person SUX

Writing about what I want, or what I am doing is a SUPER turn-off! I am NOT there, and I know it!

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