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by Anonymous

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by Artina Heartflash11/13/11

No blank stare

What all is in store?

A virgin terr'tory
Unmarked by wild bore.

A dream of Ascension
beyond the bed snore.

Origami orgasms
In Operatic score.

Applause for your poem
And request to write more.

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by Cinner06/20/13

I like "writing process" literature. I have a short story about this in my files! It would not be appreciated by the folks here though. You've captured this theme well here.

Five stars from me.

-C

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