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Brown Eyes, Blue Smile Ch. 06

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/24/10

nice

i rly liked the story hope you keep going and update soon

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by trinityx309/02/10

WOW!

I really like the story. It is sad, romantic and crazy.
I can't wait for the next chapter

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by wayseri10/13/10

next chapter. please oh please

hi, wonder when will you submit the next chapter... please, please do it soon

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by Anonymous04/12/12

Umm

1st his name was Eric then Nigel then micheal please make up your mind before you write stories it throws us dyslexic people off

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by Anonymous06/16/13

Confused

I'm liking the story so far even with the grammar errors; I don't think I ever known a 3 year old having homework or a preschooler being a caregiver of a terminally ill person.

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