All Comments on 'Revenge of the Nerd Ch. 12'

by rpsuch

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KirkelKirkelover 13 years ago
Great series

Like the series, just hate reading it a sentence at a time. I'm enjoying it in any case. Thanks

YamiBoyYamiBoyover 13 years ago
^__^

Good story. I'm looking forward to read how it eveolves. Anyone knows more stories in this line? I love them. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work, rpsuch. ^__^

bruce22bruce22over 13 years ago
Delicious tale

Hole in one! That is the advantage of combining experience with reading!

BoringOldGuyBoringOldGuyover 13 years ago
Way to go!

Ch 12 was definitely worth the (frustrating) wait. Well written and consistent story line. I am a sucker for happy stories. I anxiously await future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Yay!

The advantage of only just having read your original story this morning, means that I more to read now! I love your sly humour.

With thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Thank god...

You continued the story here. Great job once again

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Dry opinion

Great story, the pieces are too short.

JasonRTaylorJasonRTaylorover 8 years ago
A nice continuance

Her self-centered manipulation is still very much front and center, yet her motivation is more thoughtful, less - as she recognizes - "it's done, it was fun, time to run".

The title springs to mind, is this intentional on his part - it seems likely - and yet his revenge if any is planned seems almost revealed by his comment on marriage: it's a bit premature. Premature - as in early, but on the timeline ;)

In contrast he seems to have been perfectly willing to turn around and walk away from her when she was demanding that first kiss. Perhaps maturity and contentment to enjoy the girls already enthusiastically pleasuring him - and bringing in their friends!

OTOH, timing and strategy almost certainly indicate a plan...

lol, I love overthinking these things!

J

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