by rpsuch
Like the series, just hate reading it a sentence at a time. I'm enjoying it in any case. Thanks
Good story. I'm looking forward to read how it eveolves. Anyone knows more stories in this line? I love them. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work, rpsuch. ^__^
Hole in one! That is the advantage of combining experience with reading!
Ch 12 was definitely worth the (frustrating) wait. Well written and consistent story line. I am a sucker for happy stories. I anxiously await future chapters.
The advantage of only just having read your original story this morning, means that I more to read now! I love your sly humour.
With thanks.
Her self-centered manipulation is still very much front and center, yet her motivation is more thoughtful, less - as she recognizes - "it's done, it was fun, time to run".
The title springs to mind, is this intentional on his part - it seems likely - and yet his revenge if any is planned seems almost revealed by his comment on marriage: it's a bit premature. Premature - as in early, but on the timeline ;)
In contrast he seems to have been perfectly willing to turn around and walk away from her when she was demanding that first kiss. Perhaps maturity and contentment to enjoy the girls already enthusiastically pleasuring him - and bringing in their friends!
OTOH, timing and strategy almost certainly indicate a plan...
lol, I love overthinking these things!
J