i liked this, not a lot of "Dom" men would give that kind of control to their slaves, very nice
That was a delightful little story - and quite unusual too, with a nice twist at the end - well done!
but please spellcheck, whats with your and you're nowadays? also: bastard... really? why the use of this word?
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i liked this, not a lot of "Dom" men would give that kind of control to their slaves, very nice
That was a delightful little story - and quite unusual too, with a nice twist at the end - well done!
idea ok
but please spellcheck, whats with your and you're nowadays?
also: bastard... really? why the use of this word?
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