Great start, and loved how they did not have sex in the first chapter. This is how things normally would progress, not John being on top of her his first night home. Very nice touch with him taking that pillow, and him falling asleep to her scent. Hot and sexy.
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Anonymous08/03/11
in love
you are a great writer i love the way she was ugly once and urned gourges after a yeaar
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MORE!
Please so hot! So good!!! More! Please!
YES!
That was quite good. Yes, please continue!
You must give us more!
Not a bad start
Will be interesting to see how you further develop this.
THINKING ABOUT HER BROTHER HARD COCK
an awesome very erotic story. brilliant story hot and very horny.
love it from start to finish. now what will the next parts bring.
Please keep it going! Also, describe her better, personality,body,hair,eyes.
Well done
A little short, but that just leaves us wanting more. Well written and a nice job of editing the material.
A smooth reading story that is very enjoyable, thanks for the post.
More to come?
There damned well better be!
Short and not so sweet
Great start, and loved how they did not have sex in the first chapter. This is how things normally would progress, not John being on top of her his first night home. Very nice touch with him taking that pillow, and him falling asleep to her scent. Hot and sexy.
in love
you are a great writer i love the way she was ugly once and urned gourges after a yeaar
Pillow Fucking Rocks!
This an oldie but goodie and I was so happy to see some pillow masturbation. That totally rocks!!! Plus I love that he's a cop.
Too short but hot. Nuffield said! To
Too short, Nuff said, loved it but just 3 for brevity.
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