All Comments on 'Burnt Ginger'

The best, most original story I have read on here! Tiggerlilly you are an incredible author!

Lola-Loki

For the first part of the story, it reads entirely as nonconsent/reluctance, and exceptionally violently at that. Should be categorized as such to give a better expectation of content.

Great story, BUT: at least half your commas are extraneous. Makes the story very choppy. The end was odd... from the moment that Toy became Isabel, it was like a race to the end. Too quick, not enough detail.

Other than that, an interesting story.