It rings true. Saw your reference to this in the chat room, but didn't get a chance to speak to you. Would be good, I'd like to know if my own efforts to convey the girl-on-girl experience work for you.
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Anonymous06/17/11
Hi Chiara
Golly Girl, What a wonderful erotic story your first chapter lays out. I am so glad I found you today in the chat room. I was going to start with the one you felt was your best but this one I think will be hard to top. You have a wonderful way with words but I am more into the stories than the grammer. Hopefully will get to the rest in my private time and hope we run across each other again on lit... many thanks for responding dawn 47 ( bringing back memories of my youth. )
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convincing and erotic
It rings true. Saw your reference to this in the chat room, but didn't get a chance to speak to you. Would be good, I'd like to know if my own efforts to convey the girl-on-girl experience work for you.
Hi Chiara
Golly Girl, What a wonderful erotic story your first chapter lays out. I am so glad I found you today in the chat room. I was going to start with the one you felt was your best but this one I think will be hard to top. You have a wonderful way with words but I am more into the stories than the grammer. Hopefully will get to the rest in my private time and hope we run across each other again on lit... many thanks for responding dawn 47 ( bringing back memories of my youth. )
Exciting!! and HOT! Great story.
Thank you for an exciting story. I loved it.
Nice
Oh god, I hope this is a true story. Can't wait to read Ch. 02....
Awesome
Great story....loved it!
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