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Great Story
Looking forward to Ch.2
Wow!
Again.
Nice Start
It will be worth our time!
Another great start
Can't wait for the next chapter keep up the great work
Nice
A very nice story. I liked the detail about Dillon not only being a Southerner, but a Virginian. Keep up the good work.
Good writing
As usual, you wrote this very well. Historically speaking, I believe that these trains that you have Dillon riding did not exist yet. But otherwise very good.
liked the proper gun timelines, good story, continuing on after this.
Very good read
AS usual you always get me so involved in your stories, i can sit for hours reading them
probably annoying, but...
Another great story, and it's only the beginning.
However, mind the "your" and "you're" - need better proofreading/editing, that's all.
Thank you for what appears to be a great companion to The Trail West.
L
so far so good.
Wonderful story...great writing as well
Fabulous story and writing. Simply one of the best in this genre.
again you are exceeding expectations.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com
As good as they come
May not have started out with an ambush in rocks above a ragging waterfall. None the less a very good read. Yes I read your bio and seen your penn names. Will check this out. You write a little on the personal feeling side, which I kinda like. Have read some books where there is just too much thinking. Keep up your good work. I certainly enjoy. Thanks for your talent and for sharing w your fans.
coneger2
I'm getting a late start in this series
but am anxious to see where it leads.
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