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Winterborn Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/25/10

Great Story

Looking forward to Ch.2

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by AzPilot08/25/10

Wow!

Again.

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by bruce2208/26/10

Nice Start

It will be worth our time!

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by sailordblj196608/26/10

Another great start

Can't wait for the next chapter keep up the great work

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by Anonymous08/27/10

Nice

A very nice story. I liked the detail about Dillon not only being a Southerner, but a Virginian. Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous08/29/10

Good writing

As usual, you wrote this very well. Historically speaking, I believe that these trains that you have Dillon riding did not exist yet. But otherwise very good.

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by Anonymous11/03/10

liked the proper gun timelines, good story, continuing on after this.

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by rdd195311/29/10

Very good read

AS usual you always get me so involved in your stories, i can sit for hours reading them

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by Anonymous02/19/13

probably annoying, but...

Another great story, and it's only the beginning.

However, mind the "your" and "you're" - need better proofreading/editing, that's all.

Thank you for what appears to be a great companion to The Trail West.

L

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by Chief3Blanket05/28/15

so far so good.

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by kjohns200108/20/15

Wonderful story...great writing as well

Fabulous story and writing. Simply one of the best in this genre.

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by Anonymous09/09/15

again you are exceeding expectations.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com

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by Anonymous05/27/16

As good as they come

May not have started out with an ambush in rocks above a ragging waterfall. None the less a very good read. Yes I read your bio and seen your penn names. Will check this out. You write a little on the personal feeling side, which I kinda like. Have read some books where there is just too much thinking. Keep up your good work. I certainly enjoy. Thanks for your talent and for sharing w your fans.
coneger2

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by rightbank09/13/16

I'm getting a late start in this series

but am anxious to see where it leads.

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