All Comments on 'Taking Her Virginity'

Brother, I am a fellow Indian so take this in the right spirit (as I can see you've put in a lot of work here): you are clearly not very comfortable communicating in English and unfortunately, this shows.

Why not get an editor the next time so that language does not become a barrier to your story?

All the best.

but i agree about the need for an editor,

It needs a lot of work. the story should, flow, you did well to last so long as you were a virgin to. I came just as i put it in a girl.

i had a similar condition in my life but the girl was not virgin and she was not angry too.

Lovely, write more stories

Nice job buddy