All Comments on 'Marlton Wives Club'

Pleasant little story, but where is it going?

Well written little episode, but is this going anywhere?

I never did read about the wives club or what they were doing there. Is the wives cheating & trying to make up to there spouses or what?

Not a bad story , it does need another chapter . The husband might not like what he finds out when he does a little digging . Its off to a very good start , PLEASE dont turn this into a typical cuck story as they are a dime a dozen , most men would make their spouses make a choice of either stop or divorce .It could also be just a group of women praticing with each other in order to take it back to their husbands , etc . but I hope its not a willing cuck story as it is really beneath your writing skill level .

Good start. Older couple rediscovering their sexuality. Nothing too wild yet but fun to read. The wife is obviously working to an agenda and so far that is exciting. Let's hope she keeps hubby in the loop if things get too kinky.

When he discovers that their adventures are being reported in detail to her friends.

What's going on? I want to know more. There girls are adventurous and sexy and since Marleton is about five iles from Lumberson I need to know more.

loved story but dont know where it began and whats the ending

You are my favorite author and this is your best story yet. You always seem to try something new, and that makes your writing so great to read. You weave a tale, nut just rut something out. Thanks for the juicy stories.

he needs to find out and at least leave the skank and take the kids. good luck if you ever finish this story, id like a revenge story but whatever direction you think the story goes will be fine. =) keep writing its fun to read!

What's next?

DONT STOP NOW//////////////////////LET HIM FIND OUT ...............THEN KICK HER ASS TO THE CURB

Finish what you've started

Lazy author

Not bad. BUT it's either unfinished or a sequel will come out soon.

I haven't figured out what she is doing behind his back but if she were my wife, I'd be planting video and audio recorders throughout the house, backyard, car and phones. I think she may be getting some on the side. Then I would make a point of letting her know that I now kept a gun on me at all times. Explain to her that someone I know walked in on a burglary in progress, and wished he had had a gun to protect himself and his family.

But no follow up??

As another author has said. This is a good beginning but it needs to finish, so finish it.

Had there been a Chapter 2 or more, this could have received four or five stars!

Unfinished gets a big fat Zero! And FTDS is deceased!

Author, do the world a favor and either finish the damn story, or pull this story down, so no one else reads and wonders WTF is the ending!

You've crafted the beginning of what might be a good mystery story? Or at least an unusual plot line. But after all this time, there's no middle or end. Why? You apparently kept writing after this posting date? It makes me wonder if this text was copied from some obscure source that also had no end. The title itself suggests a major disconnected element. Do we have a rating here for Incomplete (I)??

Should have read the comments first. Wasted time.

I was interested in how long this story was due to the subject matter, figuring 3 pages or so. I'm not a fan of multi part or extreme number of pages. However, I was shocked to find it's only 1 medium page. For a sex club & showing what happened with his wife? I then read the last line seeing the topic wasn't covered. Glad I didn't spend the time reading the story. Would've been a waste of time. -- Bob