Marlton Wives Club

Is this the start of soemthing good?

Pleasant little story, but where is it going?

Britease asks a good question

Well written little episode, but is this going anywhere?

AND ???

I never did read about the wives club or what they were doing there. Is the wives cheating & trying to make up to there spouses or what?

hmmmm

Not a bad story , it does need another chapter . The husband might not like what he finds out when he does a little digging . Its off to a very good start , PLEASE dont turn this into a typical cuck story as they are a dime a dozen , most men would make their spouses make a choice of either stop or divorce .It could also be just a group of women praticing with each other in order to take it back to their husbands , etc . but I hope its not a willing cuck story as it is really beneath your writing skill level .

Waiting for more

Good start. Older couple rediscovering their sexuality. Nothing too wild yet but fun to read. The wife is obviously working to an agenda and so far that is exciting. Let's hope she keeps hubby in the loop if things get too kinky.

Hubby will not like it!

When he discovers that their adventures are being reported in detail to her friends.

Hot story

What's going on? I want to know more. There girls are adventurous and sexy and since Marleton is about five iles from Lumberson I need to know more.

marlton wives club

loved story but dont know where it began and whats the ending

Best story yet

You are my favorite author and this is your best story yet. You always seem to try something new, and that makes your writing so great to read. You weave a tale, nut just rut something out. Thanks for the juicy stories.

might not be but sounds like a cheating bitch tale

he needs to find out and at least leave the skank and take the kids. good luck if you ever finish this story, id like a revenge story but whatever direction you think the story goes will be fine. =) keep writing its fun to read!

Interesting Start

What's next?

stop

DONT STOP NOW//////////////////////LET HIM FIND OUT ...............THEN KICK HER ASS TO THE CURB

Finish

Finish what you've started

1 star - Unfinished story

Lazy author

Not bad. BUT it's either unfinished or a sequel will come out soon.

I Smell A Set Up

I haven't figured out what she is doing behind his back but if she were my wife, I'd be planting video and audio recorders throughout the house, backyard, car and phones. I think she may be getting some on the side. Then I would make a point of letting her know that I now kept a gun on me at all times. Explain to her that someone I know walked in on a burglary in progress, and wished he had had a gun to protect himself and his family.

Written in 2010

But no follow up??