Orgasms

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I Blame Both of These Idiots

When she told him that she was going to go out to get laid by another man, it was the equevalent of her slapping him in the face and then throwing down the proverbial guantlet. He should have looked for proof and after finding some, divorce the bitch. Her saying that she wanted this also showed how unimportant he really was to her. He should have had her take the lie-detector test. It would have shown how poor a wife she actually was. An orgasm is not an 'end all be all' in life. Isn't it also important to nurture a loving relationship? She just destroyed that when she went out with Kevin and screwed him 3 times before she came home. Or maybe, it was the other 'dozen or so' that did destroy it. Or maybe, it was the fact that she didn't stop at just one orgasm...just think about that.

The mark of a great story

is to have created a storm of comment. So this one must be great. A lot of the comment is from the usual suspects and takes it's usual course, I don't know why they bother.
JPB has created real people in a real situation. People DO do and say stupid things - it's our nature.
The moral isn't that "the bitch got away with it" it's more like "love will find a way".
I'm lucky in that my own,long, marriage has never suffered such a devastating blow. (it might have done if I'd been caught) If it had, I'm sure I would have reacted like what's-his-name here, but I would have left a door open. A happy marriage is a precious thing and can overcome major hurdles. I'd have taken her back in a blink, after suitable time and penitence.
Just to join the have-a-go at JPB, I thought the revelation at the end was a great twist, BUT the number of lovers did not fit with her continuing love and desperation to regain her husband. Leaving it with just Kevin would have been believable and enough. JPB never flinches from OTT though does he!

Just a Story!

It wasn't a bad story. But it was a sad one. Rob's reasoning that he had maintained through out most of the story was legitmate. She had killed the marriage by what she had said to him the night before she went out on the date with Kevin. When he takes her back at the end, regardless of whether she had actually screwed Kevin, Rob disregards everything that he had supposedly believed. That made it a disappointing ending by itself. Then we find out that his wife is lying to him. She really did screw Kevin. And she felt so bad about losing Rob that she waits a year and a half before she gets serious about finding him. It must have been a relief for her when she finally got home at 2:30 in the morning and found that Rob had moved on. I guess that she waits a year and a half to give herself time to keep looking for the one or two guys that can give her an orgasm.

I guess ignorance is bliss. Rob's happy. But he is married to an evil bitch! That is sad.

One of JPB's better tales

This one has several twists and turns in it, as well as an ending that can either be read as happy (because after all, the husband [though he's been lied to and cheated upon in a pretty despicable fashion] is happy) or bitterly awful.

That degree of complexity is not easy to achieve. As always, I salute JPB and his talents!

Thanks, ohio

Old folks stories are not sexy and get 1*

L A M E ! ! !

Bob, I tend to expect better from you. Your "Burn the Bitch" stories tend to be rather clear on that point from the beginning, and your "Suck it up and get back together" stories are usually equally definite.

So what on earth would have prompted you to write this travesty of a tale? She betrays him, he burns her, she lies about it, he takes her back. Okay, that sort of crap happens in real life, we all know that - but it's so far out of the "norm" for your tales that I'm incredibly disappointed in you.

The one problem with the story is

that you can learn and get better at sex. If she had an orgasm with the other guys, why wouldn't she work with her husband and tell him what she likes and doesn't like? Why wouldn't she see a therapist to learn what she could do to make it better? Personally, I would divorce her for lying to me and not talking about something for 25 years. Telling a man that he can't cut it after 25 years is probably the cruelest thing she could have done. If the orgasm meant that much to her(and it certainly might) she needed to try to learn to have one with her husband. Since she didn't try and had lied to him for 25 years by omission, divorce seems to be the correct option.

LIAR LIAR PANTIES ON FIRE

and lies have a way of catching up. TK U MLJ LV NV

Super Bitch

from the beginning to end! Why didn't she leave the poor guy alone??
The funny part is that if you believe her thoughts at the end, she has given up orgasms to be with him. Very Strange!

Interesting plot and well written, my thanks to JPB

Work on the O's

Why didn't it ever occur to either of them to pick up a "How to Sex" book? Maybe a sex Doc would be a good investment. As a first step Addie and Rob should have looked at the causes and solutions of the "O" problem TOGETHER. By skipping this first step Addie showed she was primarily looking for some strange.

Just another of JPB cheating slut wives

that got away with being a whore. Once again I don't see why any man would want a whore like this back. Maybe it's because writers get off on making the husband a stupid cuckold.

Never thought I'd say this about one of yours, Bob...

Lame. That flip-flop you did at the end really didn't have any justifiable impetus behind it, other than the author's desire to either "mix things up a bit" or perhaps to submit something other than a "she cheated, burn the bitch" story.

Either way, it left me feeling disappointed. Not in how it turned out - you're the author, and you put your hard work and creativity into your stories - but in that I really couldn't see any logical (or semi-logical) reason for how things went. If you're going to take more than 80% of the story to show how your protagonist isn't going to put up with the situation, and has written the cheating spouse off as a waste of nearly 25 years' time, then there has to be something truly compelling to suddenly reverse course and leave the reader with a feeling of being cheated.

But hey, that's just my opinion. I could be right.

Great Story

Nice twist.

Superb and Bittersweet Slut Saga !

He loves her. She loves him & gives him love, fidelity and respect ...now. I think the main narrator knows she's lying about what she did in the 18 month separation. That's why he doesn't ask for the lie detector test. The key is she. NEVER DO IT AGAIN.

Somehow against all odds, this is very romantic. They both are desirable people but neither were truly fulfilled without each other. It was bad , what parted them . She did disrespect him. He gave her the wakeup call she deserved, when she woke up alone.

These two are back together. He always loved her and could run, but couldnt hide from that fact once she found him. She'll fight to stay by his side and do anything to make him happy until one of them dies. If that isn't romantic, what is ?

Daniel Q. Steele, in his comment to this story says he is a romantic. I and
many other Literotica readers will vouch that DQS has written some wonderful stories to attest to that claim . Yet in this sardonic, world weary, terse story, JPB may have shown that he's right there in the estimable Mr. Steele's class in terms of being ' a fool for love' .

Two morons --

In an age when sex and sexual information is flooding our society, how can two literate adults go twenty-five years before the wife tells him she's never had an orgasm or he doesn't figure it out for himself?

Good story right up until the end

And then she turns out to be a cheating slut. I think JPB has gone soft on the poor cuckolded husbands lately. He sure seems to be stacking up piles of wimpy men.The other thing I've noticed is that there sure are a LOT of people that commented on this story. JPB seems to be a lightning rod for a lot of readers. I'm not alone in being unhappy with the lame ending.

i finally figures JPB out. he hates women. not one woman has he ever written about that is nothing more than a fucking garbage hole to be fucked and most of the times enjoys being a 3 hole cum dump. i thought it was the men but it really is the women, they are all the worst scum ever created. this one is no different. when a woman asks for the test GIVE HER THE FUCKING TEST SHE IS BLUFFING!

forgot to mention. when she said she had two of the 14 guys she fucked give her an orgasm but it was not as good as with husband that ti dirty cunt slut speak for - they wnated to fuck me but not support me.
when she said she sold the house to be with her man 900 miles away that is fucking whroe speak for 'everyone knows i am just a fuck hole for anything with a cock and i have to get out of dadge fast so my kids dont find out that they line up to fuck me and then tell their father.

Well, it was entertaining.

That's all I can say for it. SLUT!

#2 FOR THE 30th ANNIE

a trip to the Jerry Springer show.....TK U MLJ LV NV

She got away with it!

Shit! Rob was dumb enough to believe the whore! He should have stuck to his guns, got the lie detector and truth serum, then had her euthanized for being Terminally Stupid!

Still 4 Stars, but Wifey getting away with it cost 1.

Entertaining story - right up until the end.

He should have followed his gut and never gone back with the slut. Maybe not a lie detector test but he should have tried to dig up good old Kevin and asked him a few harsh questions. Or had a few of his friends check up on his wife's behavior when he left. Still a good JPB story. I just hated the last three paragraphs. Funny how Bob manages to stick a fork in the readers every so often.

So typically Bob...

... a great story right up to the ending. In a way, I suppose it was poetic justice because poor Rob was clueless for 25 years so it would only be right that he was clueless in the end.

Curious

to me... the commentariat seems to think that the two leads don't have orgasms when they got back together. She knows how, and he has gotten more practice...
Once one knows how, it gets easier, n'est ce pas?

Maybe the story allows change in the protagonists?

Green-something

I didn't read anything that would have changed his mind.

She cheated. He KNEW she cheated. She can lie all she wants but just because she shows up and says she didn't doesn't change anything. He should have gone for the lie detector test or just stuck with his gut which had been right up until she showed up. She was a lying, cheating slut and didn't deserve anything from him but a divorce.
Another disgusting finish Bob.

All's well that end's well

I guess that this is just one of those instances where what he doesn't know won't hurt him. After all, you really can't wear it out, and if her's still feels good, I guess that she didn't. I do like the stories where we get the woman's perspective, and we did get it here in the end. Just remember one thing, unless they're at least borderline mentally ill, women don't do anything for no reason, except in very isolated instances. They may get drunk or high, and fall momentarily, but they won't continue to do it with the same guy or even with more than one unless they're getting more out of it than just the sex. Maybe a boost to the ego, or something emotionally missing from their partner, but not repeatedly just for the sex alone. They're just not emotionally built that way.

Actually, Green117 . . .

. . . you should have read the entire story. Here's the quote, about 9 paragraphs from the ending:

She seemed to have made it her life's work to spoil me. We made love four and five times a week and while I never did give her an orgasm it was never mentioned.

Great story...

When you lie, stick with the lie.

hated it

just another of JPB short fuck you stories

typical

You just love to fuck things up at the end. Wimpy men, slut wives.

I believe that he knew...

I believe that deep down he knew she was lying!!! He let it pass because a woman that hadn't had an orgasm in 25 years, deserved to be forgiven...Where the story lost all its credibility was that she after found out the problem was hers, never look for medical help!!! Not even after they got together again!!! And the husband didn't make her look for that help...Why? Because he knew she was lying and so didn't care anymore if she got one with him or not...2*

One Star For An Unearned RAAC

Everything he said was true, and everything she said was a lie.

Jolene's rationale for breaking up with him was ridiculous. So Addy wanted to fight for him - so what? HE didn't want to fight!

He DEFINITELY should have taken her up on the lie detector offer. She either would have chickened out and run away, or she would have failed. Either way he could have thrown it in his ungrateful spawn's faces!

Really good

The twist. Ah, the twist.

His Instincts

He knew his wife, her character, her personality, her nuances and he also seemed to be very astute when it came to human nature so...

She was, matter of fact, going to go on a date and she was, without any concern, going to have sex with Kevin and he knew it, he knew his wife and her conviction was without a doubt!

Well, he knew he was right and she did betray their vows and his trust and he knew her well enough to know that if she had made up her mind and was already on the date that everything she wanted WAS going to happen so...

Typical JPB, piss us off...

Well, problem is that at their age, still young, he will constantly know that he was right, it will weigh on him occasionally and at some time...something will happen...her slip saying something to a friend, a visit back home when they run into one of her dates, her girlfriend calls and he overhears the conversation where she is being asked if she still gets the occasional lover and did she miss Kevin...at any rate - its' karma - something will happen. Too bad, she wants him for the man he is but she was willing to just casually go get fucked...some moral character!

twisted

and sick. sexcellent!

Should of Divorced The Bitch

He was a wus and should of divorced her and put and end to it.

Sad story But really like this one

patterns a many of marriages... Believe me

The only POS on LIT is you dear annony!!

The asshole of LIT Is calling someone a PS is like Hilary saying: " I didn't do it. Any of it! I'm the nicest people on earth! Trust me." Gave it a 5 to offset the asshole of LIt's 1 vote

POS is too kind a description

Gotta' say it, Bob: you're an idiot if you think that the sudden change at the end - thereby assuring your RAAC ending - is going to fly. The fact is, you spent 90% of your story sending the reader down a carefully-constructed path which provided the rationale for believing that your protagonist was well and truly finished with his less than faithful spouse.

...and then you decided to switch things up without much (if any) work put into walking your readers through how the divided couple could reach reconciliation.

It's shit, Bob, plain and simple - but only because I cannot really think of anything lower than shit which would aptly describe this story.

Oh, wait: It's lawyer, Bob.

Hmm. Never commented on this one

I am sure Bob missed my input...

This is realer than most of the readers can take. Frankly, she didn't start looking for her husband until AFTER she fulfilled her cock quest, which is telling.

Will she stray again? I don't know. But for a year, she clearly wanted to get back with the protagonist WHILE fucking around looking for the Big O. How torn up was she really? Again, I don't know, but the reader can project upon it what they will.

The transition from 'steely nerved man of virtue' to 'guy who just gave up' seemed pretty quick and without any transition. He decided to let sleeping dogs lie. And lie she did.

One wonders what her reaction would be if the husband wanted to return to her old hunting grounds, where her conquests and dragging her pussy all around town would be revealed.

But Bob already took enough chances with having an independent and lying woman in the story. He decided not to wander down that path

A trifle repetitive and since most of the repeated dialogue was "I don't believe you", we as the readers have a right to feel a little cheated. Not that the magic trick of making a reconciliation work wasn't POSSIBLE, but that Bob didn't even bother with an ABRACADABRA and a veil, just shifting pulling a rabbit out of an obviously full hat.