All Comments on 'Just Dessert'

Not up to your usual standards...

I would love to be in her place...

Kathi

Very expressive with a lot of imagery and feeling. I especially loved the "fingers slipped into the ridges of softness that guarded the citadel deep within the cradle of her thighs"

However, one gives homage at an altar, not an alter. Watch word usage and don't just rely on spell check.

4*

This was written with feeling, it was so well put so sensual.

I can't get my head around a husband wanting other men to fuck his wife I think he has a mental problem.

Well described and written by the author, just keep a better check on the spelling don't rely on spell checkers.

4 star stars fo for the writer 0 stars for the theme.

Good cuckolding, if you like this

Just Dessert

No need to comment on the plot other than to say it was

wonderfully unique. Its the writing. the imagery, the tempo,

the anticipation, that makes one feel they are part of the

group drawn into a sexual web. Wow.

A masterful piece of writing. Has to be one of the best here.

Thank you, shr