All Comments on 'Belinda Gets Black'

and well written. Ty

good story i loved it , turned me on, she will have to have some more for sure

Would have been better either without the possession-themed opening and ending, or assigned a different category and the possession part left in. It feels confused as to what it's really about.

entry, GA. Hot and dirty. *grin* Good luck in the contest! x

that this is the best written story I have ever read at literotica, but, if it isn't the best, it surely is, like Abu Ben Adam, at the top of the list. Beautifully written, with not a wasted word, with not one cliche. The characters, Belinda, Benji, Grace, are real and believable, their actions human.

This reader LOVED the story!!!!!!!!

I read this story once, and it wasn't enough. I just had to read it again. Now I've added it to my favourites so I'm going to be reading it a third time. What can I say: excellent writing with a firm grip of storyline and characterization. Totally it's a classic!

Gripping... and erotic. Well done!

wonderful story i loved it, so hot, made me want to be there , so ssexy i want more

Very cool story. Great descriptions and plenty of extremely hot action. Loved the possession concept and how you did not overuse it once the stage was set. Very well written and thoroughly enjoyable story!

Great story. Well written. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing it. Good luck in the contest.

Enjoyed this very much, Geronimo. I thought the possession aspect added a nice extra dimension to it and the fantasy itself was delicious and written with relish. Sorry, but I think you've missed last place by some way.

Belinda stories - would love to see her find and discover her inner slut. Well done as always!!! :D

Liked it a lot, the possession idea is a good one - something that needs to be explored further I think, drifting around finding other victims (or should that be competition winners!) for him to possess.

I was pleased that Benji wasn't some nasty old hobo - gave it an air of realism, rather than Belinda hooking up with a random tramp or something.

... you had me there :D

You write so well - This one really lite a fire in me. Thank you sir!

Dave.

bio,,, no doubt