All Comments on 'The Smelly Girls Ch. 01-02'

Give it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Britain has a rich legacy of great writers: Chaucer, Shakespeare, Dickens,Stevenson, Orwell. Now to that list we add Koini.

Our US cousins will read this work with envy.

Bring on chapter two!

The only thing that smells is this stupid story. Please, NO MORE!!!!!

Perhaps you ought to concentrate on a real imagination and genuine writing . Those are skills you don't need your nose for. In other words, put your nose to the grindstone and sober up.

But I am sure there will be some people who will like it. Each to there own.

I love a man that can appreciate and be turned on by what's normal and natural. We're supposed to be smelly. It's one of the senses. It's so erotic. My own smells and body odors turn me on so much. I love it when i can smell myself. Love it when other people smell it too sometimes. It's so intimate and naughty that they smell my pussy without seeing it. And as for that manly smell...:) mmmm

love your story but you need to go deeper into details would like to read chapter two

Mmmm - I too love the word "smelly" and all that it entails. My ex used to love me saying "poo, you have a smelly fanny" as I sniffed it prior to licking it clean. I would then part her big bottom cheeks as she bent over for me and remark "poo, you have a stinky, smelly arsehole" as like an animal in heat I frantically sniffed the tight, stinking little hole - absolute pleasure!!!

I had a girlfriend, whose Fanny really used to smell. It could easily 'Stink The Place Out' within minutes of me Unwrapping it- so to speak. I don't know quite what it smelled of, apart from Cunt I guess, but it was Beautiful! This lovely girl used to Pee, in the shower, let me watch her Strain her shit- she was OFTEN constipated, in fact a Soft(er) shit was a rarity. Let me smell her feet, socks, tights even panties....I think she thought that I was Crazy. However all of these paled into insignificance compared to her Fanny! Do I 'Miss' her? Yes I DO! Thank you Angel Fish.

I replace Alex with Flourisha to whom I owe so much for my experience in youthfull sex . Its not that she was an expert but she was wasnt scared & willing to learn . Her hairy young gud - cunt healthy unwashed & smelly which she wanted me to kiss & lick . Her friends had encourged her to experiemce this exqusit pleasures of a boys tongue lapping clitoris cunt hole & also suck his dick though it was often stinky . Like Alex she was eager to go all the way even anal sex . Flourisha loved her feet being kissed as foreplay but would not allow me to kiss her lips after I ate her up gud or licked her sweaty smelly feet , she told it smelled dirty . She would never touched my feet , she hated my underarm even washed , but I loved her unwashed armpits odours. Our fucking session lasted till she came with shivers & jerks of her hips rising up to meet my strokes .

Hope she learns better from Alex but I need to translate it to her language .