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by KOLKORE11/21/06

The girl at the top of the stairs

The girl at the top of the stairs/
viewed by the right parents/
And adults who believe/
Will, for sure, conquor the world!

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by KOLKORE11/21/06

Captured moments –wonderful!

Three Extended moments:
Listening; watching; expecting
One philosophical musing (might have better found its way to another grouping?)

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by duddle14612/10/06

Exquisite

Tiny Creative sparks ~ bursting into small flames

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by LeBroz01/26/07

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More haiku rolling past.

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by LeBroz01/26/07

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More haiku rolling past.

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