All Comments on 'Hot Summer Dream'

and the suggestions of nonsense.... loved the dream...

but was it Lexi dreaming of Leary depositing his ancient seed on her sweet succulent cunny or was it Leary dreaming of Lexi's itty bitties and depositing and dribbling his ink with willy nilly abandon on a Lexi canvas for our amusement?....

mm... the thoughts of writing on Alexxis's canvas does entice... might even scare away the MICE !!

I love this one.. and love your entry- youz the best!!

"There was an Old Derry down Derry, who loved to see little folks merry;

So he made them a book, and with laughter they shook at the fun of that Derry down Derry." Edward Lear

Very well done, young lady. I laughed out loud several times, and I'm still smiling. The writing, imagery and imaginative idea were all top notch, and the poetry cleverly amusing. I'm impressed.

There once was a girl named Alexis /

Whose chest was as flat as all Texas /

A cowboy would know /

With his whole herd in tow /

That to call her plains "hills" would be reckless

Roses can be red, and violets blue /

Alexis is flat, but a wonderful screw /

Rose petals and rocks /

Go like flowers with cocks /

But Alexis, I'd put my stiff, long stem into

My only objection is to your reference to "old dude". Now, it's not true that I went to school with him, but we did used to play cards together down at the Elks Club, so I don't think of him, or me, as an old dude. That said, tack another "very" onto the comment up above.

There was a young lady of Lincoln

Who said that her cunt was a pink'un,

So she had a prick lent her

Which turned it magenta,

This artful old lady of Lincoln.

There was a young man of Devizes,

Whose balls were of different sizes.

One was so small,

It was nothing at all;

The other took numerous prizes.

I love the way you have woven limericks with the story without distracting from the story...Here is my attempt :)

There is a girl named alexxxis </br>

Gorgeous as my eye sees</br>

She claims she is flat</br>

I'm interested in her twat</br>

Sucking, tasting, playing at every opportunity our bodies sieze</br>

Loved every word of that short but well written tale! Well done and good luck!

Yep, it's good enough for a five. Normally i like the sex a little more raw, but the literary twist was nice. Maybe we should create a new genera: Literary Porn.

I like your stories quite a bit

Filled with sex, twists and wit

I am just a guy

Who is nowhere nearby

But if I had a clit, I'd rub it.

It was asked for a limerick to be written

By Alexxxis with whom I'm now smiten

Loving to caress your sensitive boob

And stoking your large clit with my tube

I heard "love you" as my tube is eaten.

I'd certainly like to lay beside you on that soft bed with the fan blowing on us and think of nothing but touching you all over and tasting your womanly juices. See what your erotic tales have conjured up in my mind? I can't wait to savor another one of your stories. Thanks!

If a Balddude may be so Crass,

He wonders 'bout the size of Lexi's ass

Though Balddude lies a lot

In this he is Not

He Agrees with Sir Mix-A-Lot

So about tiny Titties don't fear

as long as you have a nice rear

He could still have Fun

By Watching her run

In this He is most Sincere

It gives me great pleasure to see,

The erotic limericks written to me.

Men hard as rocks

Beating their cocks,

Over what they think could be.

Is it the fine curves of my ass,

Or the tiny nubs on this lass?

It could be my wit,

More likely my clit,

Where I go to the head of the class.

Thank you everyone! Love, Alexxxis

Don't tell me your breasts are not sexy.

They're tasty and yummy, Dear Lexy.

I'm not one to quibble

You've plenty to nibble

You could get elected Vice Prexy!