All Comments on 'Pritti Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
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those are my scores for this series in the comment tag line. you cheapened this story by including the lecherous boss and making the couple accept the new status quo. they could have blackmailed him easily but instead you screwed up what could have been a wonderful love story. i am disappointed

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Cuck shit ruined it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Amazing bad ending !

Whoah, I..., I've got not word for that ! When some friends told me how many weak beta male were on this website, I didn't believe him, but now I know he was more than right ! To make such an 180 compared to the previous chapters, with Devon being the weakest male possible and completely out of character and I won't even talk about Pritti ( pure bitch here ), well it is almost as if two authors wrote this story. Yep, you completely shot yourself in the foot with that ending, but I don't even know why I am surprised by that here. You are not the only one, and it isn't the first time I have been badly disappointed with such an out of the blue and inconsistant ending.

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I've been writing short stories and full length novels for several years. As a professional ISO auditor and consultant I create technical documents such as standard operating procedures and health and safety best practice sheets. It is in my spare time that I write fiction, ...

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