All Comments on 'Ideal Step-daughter Ch. 01'

Good character development! When is the next chapter?

I've submitted the next three chapters and Ch. 2 just got approved.

i'll be eagerly awaiting the continuance, great beginning

I'd drill that cunt so deep oil would gush out ..damn hot story .

but the storyline is a little unbelievable. Ok - I know I'm coming to the party late but I wanted to throw in my 2 cents. I actually love the writing and the storyline but the plot is a little bit unbelievable. If you have a young 18 year old grabbing your cock underwater, I don't think you keep going as if nothing is happening. You either freak out and stop all events or you freak out and act upon it. LOL Just saying... This doesn't mean I won't keep reading - I will definitely do that! ;-)