stupid and not erotic at all
nicely written, brings out the hesitancy nicely. keep it up and take it further...the other 28 steps?
Loved the story. Entertaining and belivable.
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stupid and not erotic at all
nice!
nicely written, brings out the hesitancy nicely. keep it up and take it further...the other 28 steps?
awesome
Loved the story. Entertaining and belivable.
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