Please don't make us wait too long for more!
Need another chapter to this story soon. I love your work. Keep the stories coming.
As much as Jake sounds like a nice guy, Jos so doesn't deserve a happy ending.
Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Cat gets a happy ending!
someone needed a beat down, its now, I hope Cat beats arse and Jake dumps her, she so needs to burn in hell.
With a sister like that, Cat doesn't need enemies!!!
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
What will Jake do?
Will J.J. end up in jail?
And will Jos end up getting married?
Looking forward to the conclusion(s) ;)
wtf kind of sister is Jos? Jos and JJ belong together, those two need a good arse whipping. Please update soon ... and make Jos and JJ suffer big time!
I really love how much Daniel loves her and I think he could really heal her. I feel really badly for Jake. Reality is, he'd be best without this bitch. I think you could be a bit more clear about what happened to her. Maybe she can confide in Daniel what really happened so that it will make us understand better what it is Jos knew. I assume she knew Cat was being abused. What do you mean about where he was keeping her? How much could Daniel have been told and why would Jos have offered up info to him knowing it would go to Jake? It kinda doesn 't make sense that she would have answered his threat when he said he knew...she'd have to be unsure of what he knew first...she clearly wouldn't want to give him ammo to tell Jake, when he already could ruin her with the abortion info. So, I think it best if he not know too much..If he asks Cat to explain, saying he knows a little from Gabe and that Jos made some statement...but again it wasn't a long enough conversation nor would Jos be likely to give him more to use against her. So I'd keep what he found out to a minimum maybe. Her sister is a majorly damaged woman. I really hope Jake doesn't marry her. He will be hurt but not as much as if he is with a bitch like that. Maybe they would work things out later but she has too many problems at this point. I'm surprised she refused to tell him when he approached her in the parking lot. Especially, when threatened with the wedding being cancelled. He clearly was willing to overlook almost anything in exchange for the truth. Looking forward to the rest of the story. Hope you can clarify things ...what really happened with Cat and J.J.? Glad to see Daniel by her side.
I agree that with a sister like that, who needs enemies. I would love to see Jos get what is coming to her, but you would have to post the story in the Horror section. I hope that her parents are informed about what a witch they raised. I hope Jos and JJ both wind up in jail for the inmates to enjoy!
I can't wait to read the next chapter! Daniel is so heavenly, I want him! Jos deserves all the bad that's coming to her. How can you hate a sister so much to do something so cruel and brutal like that to her? Knowing that she almost died. She so deserves all the bad! please don't make us wait too long for the next :)
Keep the chapters coming, I'll be looking forward to them! :-)
Amazing story look at all of those you have drawn into your story! Count me among them. I am officially a fan this and your other stories are truly Special you are definatley the One! Sorry couldn't resist lol
I want Daniel too!! hahahaha. now you have kept us waiting for the next chapter. please pleaseeeee.... where is it??? :)
When that Daniel is HOT!! And I love how protective and loving he is to Cat.
I'd like to believe there is something redeeming about Jos but her actions are AWFUL. Jake deserves a lot better than her!
But I love this story and can't wait to read more!
I think I am in complete and utter love with all of your male characters where can I find a real live one of my own? Please finish your stories, I love this one and Dare me!!!
I check your site all the time. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Your stories are amazing.
I absolutely adore this story, your writing is amazing! Cannot wait until the next chapter is posted! Can you tell us if this is one of the stories your working with the publisher on?!? (thanks bio page lol)
Please complete this series... really have gotten into it.
you really need to finish ur series were dying over here!
Very well written. I can't wait for the next chapter.
That it's hard to finish a story that would win over all the readers. It must be difficult thinking of something that would save the day, without it sounding cliche or unbelievable in conclusion, if you had up to that point written an awesome story up to a cliff-hanger. But I really hope you do finish this! :)
its a great story please finish it :)
Just wanted to say thank you to all of you who have read this and will read it! I finally got the approval to post the rest so it's coming. Look forward to hearing your comments and feedback!!!
Where is the next chapter? I'm dying here!
...from now on, i'm reading ahead!. no more unfinished stories for me! *sigh* another one for the unfinished story file.
I love the story. I can't wait for the next chapter(s).
I am really enjoying this story please finish
Please finish the story I like it a lot and want to know the and
Dear god man this is golden! Not trying to rush you but this needs more chapters
Where is the rest of the story?
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