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Nice tension
Sorry to hear about the wrist! Good buildup here, if a bit fast, and looking forward to more.
too short
but in light of a bad wrist, no problem. love the storyline, and i would guess there is long way to go, hope to see more soon,
Love the story so far...hope sequels are coming soon
Loving the story so far. Your style of writing is very addictive. You leave each chapter with us wanting more.
i need more
i need need more i love this story line it is geniiuos
Happy I found this story again
I read the first 3 chapters a while ago. I founf the other 2 chapters by accident because of your hammer series. I love this story and I hope you write a little more often. I like JB alot and hope he remains clean for his son and maybe his girl.
Nice cliff-hanger!
Now I have to read the next chapter immediately.
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