by Boxlicker101
She sure seemed to put a lot of faith in good 'ole George and the hopes he could cure several days worth of starvation, though. I hope he was up to it.
Hooray for more band camp stories! Seriously, what's more summery than band camp?
This story made me giggle. You do a good job of capturing that tone of voice, too.
Interesting presentation. Well written, its funny in a sad way. She did her search but not enough research. I think I would have left George out of it- the story was about frustration and to present a reprieve in the last instance seemed to negate the thrust of the story. On the other hand it did make me smile. I guess these are the juxtopositions that make a story good. Thank you