Nadia's Tale Ch. 01

Damn!!!

okay you have to update this fast and make the next part longer, damn cliffhangers just as it gets good lol

Love it!!

Love it. Please update as soon as possible.
I can't believe that Derek shot Stacey.
Don't leave us hanging for long.

No no no

too damn short!! but im loving it so far.

*****

Nice start.

Good Start!!

I hope he gets his ass beat. I hate men that hit women. But I am loving the story so far. Update soon!!

Wonderful start

Let's see where this one is going!

Well damn...this story is good!

This story has a wonderful start that carried through to the end of the chapter, wish it was a bit longer but so far so good! I can't wait to see what happens next...*grabs popcorn and sits at computer waiting for update* Keep up the good work!

oh, my!!!!!

nice set up! i'm anxious for the next chapter. keep up the good work!

you so got my attention

don't leave it for another 2yrs before u come back :)

I agree with the other posts

Great start to the story. I was stunned that he shot her in the back. What a coward he is. Hopefully, she will survive and be able to meet the cute guy that has come to her rescue. Thanks

With a start like that...

I hope you won't leave your obviously, totally interested readers hanging (certainly not for two years, as another reader commented) and that we'll get to enjoy another installment soon. Just awesome! I can't wait to see what happens for Nadia and the newcomer... and Derek had better get what's coming to him soon!

Wow!

Very different and very good. The scenario you gave us seems VERY realistic. I hope you continue with this story.

what's next

That was really interesting and I hope u are going to continue this story I can honestly say it is not like anything I have ever read.

WHERE

Is the rest? Why are you waiting so long to post the next chapter? Something tells me your gonna be one of the many others on this site. Where you start and don't finish. I hope you prove me wrong.

Please....

I can't wait for the next chapter.

It's On!

This happens in real life, the cheater becomes defensive and angry at being caught. I love how she finally realized her true worth, and decided to take a stand.
More is needed from this story!

OMG this is hilarous

Ex crazy azz hell, LOL Good chapter, I'm hooked I luv that part when she says He's cute, I'm single and dying LOL

WOW

I hope you plan on finishing this story its getting good my goodness what a lunatic he is please update soon thanks!!

Interesting story...she was even joking right up till she passed out. Too bad we were left hanging.