All Comments on 'Sweet Seduction'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
EXCELLENT!

I'm glad you wrote a new story, instead of continueing your last. Very erotic!

victoriangentvictoriangentover 13 years ago
It is terrible to

waste a good story when there are editors available to help you. Your story is very good....just a shame to reduce it to mediocre when it could have been substantially better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Hot

Made my pussy good and wet - loved it

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
A nice erotic story

What is going to happen when mom gets home, will he still fuck his daughter?

Thanks for the good read.

tickled_pink_69tickled_pink_69over 13 years ago
OMG!

I am really in love with your stories. You have the heat and momentum just right. What happened to the first one, Night Moves? It seems to have been removed. Keep up the good work!

Joey201Joey201over 11 years ago
More please

I loved this story. I hope you continue it. Great job

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great one

very nicely written.. I loved the seduction part! M all wet reading it.. I still have my fingers buried deep into my pussy.. Fucking hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Somewhat overdone with less than credible dialogue.

FYI, only about 5% of a cumshot comes from the balls, do some research.

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