My Anime Girl

Refreshing

Refreshing !!!! To bad more men and women would give themselves permission to move on. To many keep staying thinking it will work out. Of course if it hadn't been for Lisa setting it up they may never have met.

Good story!

Good story, if a bit fast paced.

Was happy to see him kick his Lisa habit, but would have liked to see him spend maybe a week or two in winning his anime girl. Still, its a good enough story that I wish there was more.

Nice.

A bit short and rushed, but very, very nice.

Nice storie but why the hurry?

Why the hurry? So you developed a storie line and started to write. But why not take the time to flesh out your characters a bit and develop the "scenes" some more. I am sure that would make it a better read. Keep on with the good work. Regards Umberto.

Liked It

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More Than alright

Very Good. Good leason for women like Lisa, who jerk you around,
than get pissed when you stop buying their bullshit and move on.

Bravo

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I really liked this story, my one complaint is that it is too short, could you rewrite it and make it 10 pages long (with extra plot of course).

K.

AINT LOVE GRAND

very nice story - well written - gave it a 5.

pretty good but kinda short

Excellent short story.

Enjoyed this a lot. A little editing/proofreading might be in order but the story itself shined through the rough spots just fine. Looking forward to reading all your work next.
Thanks.