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Awwww!
Awwww!
Just goes to show
the biggest and best looking men are not always the best ones to have around, and sometimes the one you love has been there all the time. good work and as usual, i find your stories are the best way to start my day
Beautiful Romance
Luckily I did the school bit almost 70 years ago and there was no ADD or meds to keep me under control.. Luckily there was a principal who discovered that I all ready knew what they were trying to teach me.
Between weapons in school and tranquilizers for bored students I am sure I would never have become professor emeritus.....
Great and timely story DG....
Good story DG
It kind of gave my day a kick start so I went and gave my wife a big kiss.
Yeah I know some assholes will say "yecch, hurl" etc. but screw them - love is love and you got that right.
Well done.
thanks
I had just read a story that had me be upset. I knew when I saw your story listed, I would feel better if I read it. I did and it did. ;-)
Just Lovely!
Thank you for a magnificent,wonderful story!
Great Story
A very well written story.
Although I do have one small criticism. You said that when Jerry was in Fifth grade he still had one sibling in high school. But you also mentioned that there was a ten year gap between him and the next youngest child in his family. Normally you are ten years old when in fifth grade. That would make his sister twenty. She should have been in college by that time.
Other than that as I said previously the story is very well written.
Some of the story hit home. Well done, sir.
As a member of Mensa, I understand the problems. I didn't meet my "true love" until later but the rest hit close to home.
Just your usual great story!
Always watch for your byline. Only a very few authors here approach your talent and skill as an author. Thank You!
Wonderful Values!
This is my first time to comment. Many stories have left me in a vacuum. The apparent values and attitudes show through. I find yours very much in accord with my own and added such a great deal to my enjoyment. I will watch for your name in the future.
A life well lead
This is what life is all about - respecting yourself and respecting people around you. Our hero and Jordan, both respected themselves and people around them. This is the foundation of a good life. Many thanks for writing such a beautiful story.
Problem with timing
Nice story, but I want to be nit-picky about something.
Early on, the narrator says in the story:
"I was never a problem and was always an all A student till this year."
Then, years later, he says:
"Before I explain my business I need to tell you about what happened last year."
Then more years pass after that, according to the epilogue. I've noticed this problem with some of your other stories too. You need to choose one time the story is being told, and stick with that all throughout the story, or else things get confusing for the reader. You can't start a story with the sentence "Last, week, my wife left me," and then have two years of events take place after that (not unless you explain the time shift in some way).
Good story, other than that one little thing.
Another great story
You did it again with another wonderful and heartfelt story. I love to read your stories and go back and re-read them as some just make you feel good after you finish reading them. keep up the great work.
recognize myself
I recognize myself, in the first 500 words of this story. What was your inspiration for the story, given that ADD/ADHD would not have existed (based on your age) in your own childhood?
Curious.
the sweetest story I have ever read
I cannot thank you enough for giving me truly the sweetest story I have ever read. There are lines in this, especially on the last page, that will stick with me for ever. This is a story told from the heart. Thank you for such a wonderful experience.
Truly Beautiful!
Sometimes, the best stories need the least sex. This story was truly beautiful. I don't find a lot of stories like this.
Thank you for writing it.
Classy
A story with heart and class. Thanks.
You did it again!
Whenever I see your name on a story I know I'm in for a good read! Too much of what gets on this site is meaningless, ungramatical and totally uninspired. You never fail me! Keep up the good work!!! BRAVO!
Damn! I find myself in agreement with old Size14!!!
I don't know if I should worry or not.
D.G., I'm a fan of course, but this was even better than your usual fare, which is always better than most anyone on the site. This was the kind of story that is downright uplifting! Thank you again for all that you do for us, your many readers.
Heartfelt
Another great story from DG. A story with lots of heartfelt feelings. Keep them coming DG I have been a fan for a long time and really like your stories.
Gotta Love a Happy Ending
Very nice, DG. Now, if I could only be a page from your fairly tale book, life would be wonderful. Good luck in the contest!
Whoa! Wonderful story DG.
The message to her was "come see the greatest fire you'll ever see” She soon stood next to her loving husband and holding his arm said "Its OK Thomas, your only 64 you can re-build it" ...as they stood and watch Menlo Park Lab, burn to the ground.
You are never too old (or young ie: Puppy Love) to start or... start over.
DG you seem to be starting over each time your creative juices flow. Great writing and look forward to your next! Thanks for sharing on Lit.
Best wishes
x
They're always great
But this was better.
great
it was a wonderful story. very soft and beautiful
Aww...
That was very romantic and sweet. Well done and good luck in the contest!!!!
Congrats to favorite author
DG, you are one of the best authors in Lit. I always look for your work. Your boy genius, though, Jeffrey, needs to remember his English grammar from time to time.
Fantastic.
Wonderfully romantic story. The only thing that tarnished it were the cracks about autistics - because I happen to be autistic. Many of us have PhDs, you know, but I settled for a Computer Science degree.
At any rate, this isn't about me - and I loved everything else about your story. I especially loved where the football slimebag was put in his place! 9/10.
Very well done
A good sweet love story with a good story behind it. Written and edited extremely well.
A story that makes the reader think as one reads the story of some of the things in one's past.
Thanks for this good story.
Beautiful !!!
Beautiful !!!
Nice!
Don't read here much, always busy editing or writing, but I have tried to make an effort to read the contest entries of other authors.
A feel-good story, sweet. Thanks for sharing.
You are indeed a talented writer! Best of luck.
Primo!
Excellent writing! (Nice touch, with the over-diagnosed ADD.)
This story may well be one of your best works.
Happy tears.:)
Well I must say this is the first time a literotica story has brought me to tears. This was such a wonderful, feel-good story and actually reminds me a little of my fiance and I. Thank you for sharing this with the world. :)
More!!!
Please keep writing. I love your stories.
Amazing
One of the best, if not the best story I have read on here. Really amazing!
loved it
loved this story...
when i read romance section.. I want to read a story like this where there is love and not just sex... Thanks for this one :)
Yep a beautiful story
Well planned and very well written -
Nothing to far out so it is totally plausible too -
Utterly delightful.
No further comment regarding this story seems necessary. You are an excellent writer.
Stunning!
As always another great story from DG Hear, and for that we thank you.
These type of stories always bring a smile to my face and a tear to my eye...hope you write more like this.
Whenever I'm feeling lonely or down I just head to DG Hear's submissions and things start looking up.
Thank you.
C
PS. Apologies for posting as anonymous.
just brilliant
says it all
Wonderful
This is one of the best stories I have read. I too am writing a story about "Puppy Love". I hope it is as good as yours. Although mine has a few more twists in it, I hope you read it and comment on it as feedback that I will be able to use. Congrats on a well written story.
Wonderful Fairy Tale
What this world needs more of is happy stories. They don't have to be real or true or make a lot of sense, but we need happy stories to pick us up from the daily mess we read about and hear about. This was an unbelievable tale, but who cares? It would be nice to think that there are people who are good and wholesome and faithful and care about each other...even if we don't think those people really exist. Thanks for the fantasy. 5*
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