by isloobagpipes
I liked your story a lot. It's obvious that English is not your first language of choice but you did well, certainly better than I could do in your shoes. I loved the sisters armpit licking - sucking the sweat off of her underarms. So hot.
Loved your story from the start. Very nice progression into everything. Looking forward to more of your stories.
I'd like to read about how the three of them spent their summer fucking each other .
Thanks
Nicely paced but then it changed and seemed to race to the ending
would have liked more pakistani stuff in the story. try and include more cultural nuances next time.
Any woman showing her cleavage in a place as primitive and western-phobic as Islamabad would have been stoned, or abducted, raped and murdered; the place is a hot-bed of stone age prejudice and misogyny, and no Pakistani family would have allowed their nubile young daughters to remain unchaperoned for even a few hours, let alone weeks on end in a city teeming with frustrated males with no chance of ever getting married or having sex. I was stationed there once, and it was like travelling back in time to the time before they invented toilets, covered sewers, clean water, or rational behaviour.