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Pakistani Family

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/28/10

Wicked good

I liked your story a lot. It's obvious that English is not your first language of choice but you did well, certainly better than I could do in your shoes. I loved the sisters armpit licking - sucking the sweat off of her underarms. So hot.

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by Nitehawk2Bear08/28/10

Loved your story from the start. Very nice progression into everything. Looking forward to more of your stories.

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by digdaddyrich08/29/10

I would hope that the author would continue this good story

I'd like to read about how the three of them spent their summer fucking each other .

Thanks

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by Anonymous09/06/10

nicely done

Nicely paced but then it changed and seemed to race to the ending

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by grassmanross11/08/10

Hot Stuff

Very hot story. I begs to be continued. Please.

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by Anonymous06/15/12

could have been better

would have liked more pakistani stuff in the story. try and include more cultural nuances next time.

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by Anonymous06/25/12

shit

What a load of bollocks

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by silkman194706/10/14

smiling sister

sist smiling nice she cum

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by Anonymous03/20/15

Not even slightly realistic,

Any woman showing her cleavage in a place as primitive and western-phobic as Islamabad would have been stoned, or abducted, raped and murdered; the place is a hot-bed of stone age prejudice and misogyny, and no Pakistani family would have allowed their nubile young daughters to remain unchaperoned for even a few hours, let alone weeks on end in a city teeming with frustrated males with no chance of ever getting married or having sex. I was stationed there once, and it was like travelling back in time to the time before they invented toilets, covered sewers, clean water, or rational behaviour.

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