by hoo_hoo_boo
This is some of the best humor I have ever read. It is funnier if you have ever been around a dairy farm and understand exactly what is being described.
Really wicked, and funny at the same time. A very enjoyable read. Well done.
This is a real life summer romance!! lol complete with all the farm antics. I could easily see this becoming a movie. Great job!!
what a creative imagination. This just kept building and building. Humour is so hard to write and slapstick even moreso but you did it incredibly well. Wonderful story! Thank you!
Expect the other authors entering this contest to petition to have your story disqualified. It's their only chance.
Based on my vote,you are the clear WINNER!
He should keep him and Rename him Fordy. as for the wife show the Kids the Video and Tell her Adios. Let Fordy know that it could be Around the Area quick.
Need's a second chapter: kids, hospital and what happens there