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Codex, Brought to her Knees

byColleenKentucky©
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by Anonymous08/31/10

Loved it

I think you really captured the characters, twisting them just a little bit to do something totally hot.

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by Anonymous09/03/10

Noooooooooo... That's so wrong!!!

Oh honey, what you wrote! Abomination! We know that Will is just a poser haunted by the memory of the jeers and taunts from so many gym classes and summer camps.
Kilt? More like his older sister's hand-me downs worn in an attempt to cover the object of universal scorn- his poor little hairless, shriveled beanbag.
Big cock? WILL!!! Put away your older sister's strap on!!! That's for her to use on you and your little "asses of evil" buddies.

RESPECT FELICIA!!! RESPECT CODEX!!!

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by Anonymous12/08/10

Excellent

Nice job hope you make more stories. My only thing was I could not tell if codex was her own character like an AI.

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by Anonymous07/07/11

Hot but it sucked.

... It'd be hotter if she got revenge, and Will had to delete Fawkes. I only like domination stories if the submissive party is dominant in real life. Fawkes is dominant in the series, so I think he should be dominated.

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by Anonymous09/16/14

I really loved it. Do more!!

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by Anonymous01/13/15

Nice!

Really liked it, although you said that the "Axis had one" when you meant "won"

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