by rpsuch
This is turning into a nice little tale of the perils of true love.
Nice chapter. Ashley is certainly getting the point about what Jeff has taught her, hehe. Good work. ^__^
The more I read this, the more I realize how fun the story is. Good one!
Rob
Now I am worried....why is Jeff so preoccupied? Good Job, fun story!
But what would be an appropiate revenge for what crime? Do we have something in the future yet or will we have a happy ending.... ??
I think I can see some sadness and heartbreak coming, but I sure hope the story goes long enough for her to earn a happy ending.
buy his book! In fact, buy this guy's book! rp has such talent that you find yourself enjoying every word and especially all the subtle humor. There is no finer writer on this site. Enough said!
Probably the best chapter so far in an absolutely delightful tale.
Thank you.
Lots of big words. lol
I have a pretty extensive vocabulary but I'm glad to have Dictionary.com tab up when I read your stories. I'm not sure perfunctory was the best word for the last sentence though. I'm not sure he'd been sleeping at her place to establish a routine nor that he was the type to do anything superficially or with a lack of interest.
Just as she has come to understand his method of love making, I believe she's going to have a painful revelation that he's emotionally clueless.
Either that, or there really is revenge on tap...
Great few chapters building to - something!
J
.....Continues at the high standard of quality it has shown so far, it'll end up the best I've read on this site. I love it
I can see where this is going - Ashley has forgotten about Jen and Candy and that's just waiting to explode in her face...