All Comments on 'Revenge of the Nerd Ch. 16'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
A fun read

This is turning into a nice little tale of the perils of true love.

YamiBoyYamiBoyover 13 years ago
^__^

Nice chapter. Ashley is certainly getting the point about what Jeff has taught her, hehe. Good work. ^__^

KirkelKirkelover 13 years ago
Fun

The more I read this, the more I realize how fun the story is. Good one!

Rob

m48gunnerm48gunnerover 13 years ago
Fun, but

Now I am worried....why is Jeff so preoccupied? Good Job, fun story!

bruce22bruce22over 13 years ago
Enjoyable Tale

But what would be an appropiate revenge for what crime? Do we have something in the future yet or will we have a happy ending.... ??

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I think I can see some sadness and heartbreak coming, but I sure hope the story goes long enough for her to earn a happy ending.

HarddaysknightHarddaysknightover 13 years ago
If you can find a better writer,

buy his book! In fact, buy this guy's book! rp has such talent that you find yourself enjoying every word and especially all the subtle humor. There is no finer writer on this site. Enough said!

apollonaapollonaover 13 years ago
Nice

Probably the best chapter so far in an absolutely delightful tale.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Please!

This better be a good ending!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Dry opinion

The student becomes the professor ...

LuvinWritenLuvinWritenabout 11 years ago
Lots of big words. lol

Lots of big words. lol

I have a pretty extensive vocabulary but I'm glad to have Dictionary.com tab up when I read your stories. I'm not sure perfunctory was the best word for the last sentence though. I'm not sure he'd been sleeping at her place to establish a routine nor that he was the type to do anything superficially or with a lack of interest.

JasonRTaylorJasonRTaylorover 8 years ago
Excellent details!

Just as she has come to understand his method of love making, I believe she's going to have a painful revelation that he's emotionally clueless.

Either that, or there really is revenge on tap...

Great few chapters building to - something!

J

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
If this story...

.....Continues at the high standard of quality it has shown so far, it'll end up the best I've read on this site. I love it

bhojobhojoalmost 2 years ago

I can see where this is going - Ashley has forgotten about Jen and Candy and that's just waiting to explode in her face...

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