"Poodle Girl" and the Rainstorm

Could use some editing...

Not a bad read though. I know it's difficult in first person to describe the narrator, but I would've liked to have known what Chris looked like, too. I notice this is your first submission to Literotica. I wish you the best of luck in the Summer Lovin' contest and with your future submissions to the site. :)

Thank you.

Thank you MichChick98. You are right. I should have added more about Chris’s body. The descriptions I wrote in pre-writing were discarded because I thought they sounded almost arrogant in first person. This is my first one. I have concepts for Halloween, Christmas, and Valentine's Day contests. My homework will be reading your stories for inspiration as I move into better third person writing. :)

I loved the casual start leading to the build-up. Chris would be my hero too, if my little dog took off like that, and he rescued her (twice). That's quite the thank you that Gina gave him. I love how considerate and gentle he was with her and with her dog :) Nothing like lovin' in the rain (or being shielded from it)! Can't wait to read more.

~Luna

Great Story

good story would love to read what happens next between Chris and Gina