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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/10/13

Sorry, BobNbobbie,

Not legal anywhere in the world - except Iran.

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by monkcalm01/06/14

HAHAHA funny story

knock knock...who's there...not you son in two weeks bitch....haha
a man in 30's get's a call his daughter needs bone marrow...he has no daughter..high school love moves at 16 but was pregnant..never told man..now wants his help..says go fuck your self....you decided to never tell me so not mine bye...he is married two kids....mom to mom talk she agrees to get kids tested behind husbands back....husband finds out and is a lab tech my friend....no match for girl but the son 12 is...funny thing is the girl is no where near a match....hmmmm says tech..wife is nervous...DNA says tech....gets test without wife....not his little girl...gets DNA from poker buddie(1 of him 5 of us)..match....Divorce....1 daughter his but couldn't give a shit about(she knew who he was but choose not to contact man.pro militant feminist)
a son who is his that wants to save his sister (doesn't understand new sister hates men, and big sis doesn't want to know the man's family), a small girl not his that he has no right's to under the divorce whom hi loves dearly....a wife who we all used all our connections to destroy and our poker friend who we just pretty much drove to suicide....ahh life it is interesting.

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by Anonymous01/26/14

Well played!

They completely destroy him and then have the gall to ask him to save their son? I liked the story and his reason for not being able to donate the kidney. But I note that they never asked to see his scar. I wonder if he lied? (That would have been an nice twist). And I wonder if he could sue them for fraud regarding never informing him about being the sperm donor? I do think his revenge played out well. They will suffer for the rest of their lives after Gordy dies. Good job.

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by sdc9207802/05/14

Comments are missing the irony

Had his wife not cuckolded and then ruined him, he never would have found himself destitute and forced to sell one of his kidneys. The mother killed her own son, 25 years before he was even born.

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by LoneEagle05/19/14

Okay by me

Yes, it is short, but it's a flash story, so lots of the background won't be there. As for the selling of the kidney, we know it happens even illegally, so I don't mark the story down for it.

All in all, a very good flash story.

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by sugna05/19/14

Truth to this

There is a truth to this theme. I have seen many evil doers seem to get away with their misdeeds. Unfortunately, in many of these cases, it is not them but their children that wind up paying the price for their parents sins, wrongs, and crimes. Take a close look at the next unscrupulous businessman you meet and his family. How often their children are a mess. Why was Gordon in a car accident? Reckless driving? Drugs? Booze? Maybe, maybe not but it would fit the picture.

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by betrayedbylove09/27/14

Ha

They deserved that. What they put the innocent betrayed husband through, they deserved worse. And they'll get it. Fucking cheaters.

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by impo_5809/27/14

First place...

First place they shoudn't have gone talk to him...They did, and now they still will loose their son and the guilty will always be with them...

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by Rhomanov04/19/15

*****

Kids matter. Too bad too many parents realize this far too late.
Good read. 😎

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by Anonymous08/30/15

I guess that's some kind of revenge

But not much for what they, she especially , did to him. I don't know how she could look him in his face. What a horrible woman.

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by Anonymous05/04/16

Her Over-the-top Greed Cost Her Son's Life

Readers can blast me if they so choose, but after what she has done, if I were the ex-husband, I would feel far less obligation to give up a kidney to a child I had been denied access to for a quarter century than a stranger's child. A great story with a great ending.

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by Anonymous09/07/16

Duh

A very good BTB and fucking her ass hole husband.

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by icebread10/23/16

What about....

Her giving her son one of her kidneys

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