All Comments on 'Siblings with Benefits Ch. 12'

pplllleeeaasssee write more im addicted now please i want to know if she falls in love with mark

I think this is my all time favorite Story , Ever!

It's clear she is in love with her brother she just needs to come to terms with it like he has, thanks and great work you have a gift!

Haha a pain in the ass!!! Lol

Seriously man, aside from the editing errors your work has, the story was astounding. Admittedly at this point, I want to skip all of this and just head back to the present. You showing a glimpse of it kind of ruined it for me. But nonetheless, the characters are amazing, plot development (if only it was chronological), and descriptions were spot on. I feel myself connecting with Megan and her ups and downs.

Beside Megan being manipulative, and no communication happeneing...hmm. It's frustrating. The father figure here seems to be a good man, if a little clueless. A lot of Mark's problems seem like they could be helped by letting the father in. Mark is not the first or the last to be hurt, instead the problems are being suppressed by Megan and her actions. Wow. Just, wow. Yes, story is hot and steamy, no question. Just seems like an odd path to take in the area of healing. Hope everything comes out all right in the end. Sincerely, PB

Your story is old but I'm reading through chapter 12. But I guess why Doug is mad about Mark. Is that for Mark telling him about his love for Megan?

This is another fantastic story made me hot excited angry and I was hoping he would. Fuck. His uncle. And dad up

Not sure if I follow the chronological shifts and how the story is affected, but then I get my mind wrapped around the latest sexual coupling and enjoy the direction the story is headed. Although sex is sex, you have found multiple ways for your readers to enjoy it.