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by Anonymous

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by Lonewolf18709/18/10

Wow, that was a hot story, I can not wait for the second part.

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by Anonymous12/01/11

fake

too fake....should have built the tension and had sex one by one.....no girl in the right mind would suddenly have a 3 way just because she made the guy hard....expecially if it were a cousin fix this for next chapter

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needs more

Since it was under grandmother and lesbian incest. I was expecting grandma to be involved not just walking in after. Could use a little more build up to the sex. All in all a good first attempt and would like to read part 2, 3 etc.

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by Anonymous11/22/17

Bisexual Female Cousins

I clicked on this story because of the tag "Bisexual Female", and I find it endlessly amusing that the titular twins are (almost) named Jizzy and Lezzie.

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