This absolutely sucks!
No, it does not absolutely suck. It's a well written little glimpse into someone's life. If you have a problem with it, how 'bout come constructive criticism instead of just insults?
Just to put the WTF guy at ease. He ends up fucking her in the second chanpter, in the ass... hard! In the third we find out he is her brother. Hey, I want comments. If you think the characters are shallow or my syntax sophmoric, please let me know. That guy though... He's a dumbass.
Decided to just ask about this part of story description... "and unexpected admirer." AND?! REALLY?! And what?!
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This absolutely sucks!
Silly Anonymous Person....
No, it does not absolutely suck. It's a well written little glimpse into someone's life. If you have a problem with it, how 'bout come constructive criticism instead of just insults?
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Just to put the WTF guy at ease. He ends up fucking her in the second chanpter, in the ass... hard! In the third we find out he is her brother.
Hey, I want comments. If you think the characters are shallow or my syntax sophmoric, please let me know. That guy though... He's a dumbass.
What's In Your Eye?
Decided to just ask about this part of story description...
"and unexpected admirer."
AND?! REALLY?! And what?!
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Back to Beauty and the Beholder or
More submissions by ofloveandlust.