need to be more frequent with your updates to this story. i keep my eyes glued to your story page to see when the next chapter's out. Keep up the good work.
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Anonymous09/06/10
I Love this Series
It is so refreshing to read a story that is well assembled with likeable characters and story line that can be followed. Plus you have proofread it and used complete sentences! Too many stories today look and read like a huge text message. Bravo for a job well done and a hot story well written!
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Anonymous09/07/10
HOT!!!
I'm waiting for the wife to come home and catch him playing with his three friends and join in the party!!!
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you definitely
need to be more frequent with your updates to this story. i keep my eyes glued to your story page to see when the next chapter's out. Keep up the good work.
I Love this Series
It is so refreshing to read a story that is well assembled with likeable characters and story line that can be followed. Plus you have proofread it and used complete sentences! Too many stories today look and read like a huge text message. Bravo for a job well done and a hot story well written!
HOT!!!
I'm waiting for the wife to come home and catch him playing with his three friends and join in the party!!!
Wow. Another good series
Wow. Stumbled upon this.
you got a few good series with you
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