Better than expected . You kept the story very realistic and it reminded me of past encounters with my own cousin .
well written. Thank you! It's good to know, there are a few more chapters!
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Very good
Better than expected . You kept the story very realistic and it reminded me of past encounters with my own cousin .
liked it!
well written. Thank you! It's good to know, there are a few more chapters!
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