All Comments on 'My Girlfriend's Married Sister Pt. 01'

Hope its as good as the First.

Nice build up but, too short.

a story about two people nobody would want to have for friends.

YOU ARE ALREADY ONE OF MY FAVORITES ON HERE. I wish you'd do slightly longer build ups and stop breaking up your stories, but you pick great scenarios and characters and I look forward to each new installment. You could have gone more in depth here with the husband, etc. But you are a very very strong writer with a great eye for tension. All you need is follow through.

The only one not obviously cheating was the cuckolded husband. This was just not my kind of story...sorry.

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You are a good writer. The story is believable. Ignore the negative comments. They are all jerks anyway.

Thanks for a good beginning of a great story. Hope to see more!

Fuck You, Liar.

why is it in all your storys you cum as soon as you stick it to them and they all love it ?

Why have'nt you picked it up with More chapters.

Why aren't there more chapters? Although i would have like to see more details of their sexual experience, this was a very erotic story!!

A project for F T D S ?

Agree with Al. Calling FTDS.

Low life cheats with.married whore and betrays girlfriend with her.sister. What a nice man.

Good story as far as it went. Needs more detail that just basically, "I put my dick in her and we both came." The really good stories are full of detail-what she looked like, how she was built, what you did with her, and she with you, etc. Fill the story line out a bit.

Oh, and disregard the many trolls on the Loving Wives page. It's like they read the story on a page about wives who cheat, then get offended about it, as if it was there own wife. It's like going to Burger King and complaining that they serve hamburgers. What did you really expect to find on a page called Loving Wives??