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Best Laid Plans Ch. 01

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by fridayam09/06/10

Good start

but maybe you should have written a bit more to get us going on the story. Nice writing, and some sassy lines. I look forward to more.

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by ILienBagby09/06/10

Wonderfully

well written. Enjoyed the clever asides, the nice detail and the care establishing the situation. Am waiting for more by this so smart writer. More, soon, PLEASE.

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