I love this rewrite. I hope this isn't the end
Fun, but the chapters are just so short......anyway, short or not, I really enjoy both the anticipation and the realization of that anticipation!
I enjoyed your original much better. I'll wait until you have several more chapters before returning.
I love this series but I agree with the crowd I would rather see fewer chapters but each one be longer. Either way I want to see the series continue for quite some time
It doesn't matter. Do it like you want to. I'm happily with you one way or another.
I guess I am a wimp, that is I read the story to enjoy and not to criticize its content...
Just relax and enjoy the story. While I too am disappointed in their brevity I anxiously await future chapters.
The chapters may be short but the content within them is great. I like how the story is unfolding and can't wait to read more.
I think this was the funniest chapter so far. I read the very first version, and I agree with others that fewer chapters that are a little longer would be nice. But I still love this story.
This was delightful. What a wonderful set of chapters that process a relationship. I'm thinking it ends well; otherwise I might be like Jeff and run because I got scared it might not. Even if it does end badly I don't want to miss all the good that comes.
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