by andtheend
What craziness! -Has this SWF writer ever actually experienced the triumph of taking a large black male member fully inside her anal entrance? Even a dildo would be something worthwhile to write about, if you were only brave enough to experiment with both pain and pleasure, in finally accomplishing what all SWFs understand to be a utopian 'valhalla' of carnal activities, here on Earth. Please attempt ONE genuine Anal activity before you write 'mixed race' fictional nonsense like that again? Voted 3 BTW in sympathy, rather than empathy!
To the poster below. Do you understand that this story was fiction? Do you really believe this was a real story. Hello?
The writer was writing about fictional characters. This story was not what the writer believed, but what her fictional characters believed.
Yet, no matter, you just used this wonderful story to forward your enjoyment of anal sex by bashing the story of a writer.
As a writer who writes here, we don't need readers likey you. No doubt, you've never written a story and wouldn't even begin to understand the difficulty of the writing process.
I thought this story was funny as all Hell and I gave you a 5 vote.
How bout just write in normal language. I know already how uneducated backward idiots talk and use gutter language. Its not something I want to try and navagate when I read a story. It lost the entire possibility for me of being erotic with all the slang, and "Nigger" usage.
Perhaps, had you read the story and not bashed it, you would have realized the need for the story line, which by the way was role play, but you didn't read far enough to realize what was happening. You were just intent on bashing my story.
Nonetheless, thank you for your comment.
I can see how this might offend some people.
I read the "n" bomb and thought about stopping, but I did not.