Nice story! The plot-twist gave me a little grin and was unexpected. But it all fit together nicely! Just wasn't the same black widow I was expecting. I wonder if he started hallucinating before the bite due to the heat, or after the bite... either way, had fun.
Captivating story with a twist that gives you pause for thought and a shiver when you comtemplate the skill with which this author manipulates the gardener. This one is worth a second reading.
That was` a story that left me with a soft-on. It wasn't sexy, nor erotic. I don't know what the writer got for writing that story but he should have gotten life!!
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didn't see that coming
Nice story! The plot-twist gave me a little grin and was unexpected. But it all fit together nicely! Just wasn't the same black widow I was expecting. I wonder if he started hallucinating before the bite due to the heat, or after the bite... either way, had fun.
Chill down the backbone
Captivating story with a twist that gives you pause for thought and a shiver when you comtemplate the skill with which this author manipulates the gardener. This one is worth a second reading.
Love it.
Good stuff. Just like an Outer Limits episode.
Glone goes the Dick
That was` a story that left me with a soft-on. It wasn't sexy, nor erotic. I don't know what the writer got for writing that story but he should have gotten life!!
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