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A very sexy start!
Can't read to see what happens. A very sexy and well written story.
Wonderful pick-up scene
I liked the conversation between the women and the slow buildup of sexual tension between them. Makes me eager to find out how things develop back at Chrystal's dorm room.
Delicious dancefloor discovery
Wonderful evocations of everything from dancefloor sensuality to flirtation, exhibitionism, a light spanking-- all great at giving readers a very tangible, physical sense of these two women and the heat emitting from their proximity to each other (just the detail of that cellphone in the backpocket of her jeans as she sits on Amber's lap is delicious, never mind that it later vibrates!). Plus since Chrystal doesn't have the 'excuse' of alcohol in her system, it's nice to think that the energy between these two isn't purely the afterproduct of the usual nighttime imbibing!
It's a highly charged, sexy encounter on every level!
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