again a very nice chapter to start off with. i loved the little contrast in her feelings, she loved being pantyless when wearing a skirt, knowing very well there may always happen something to expose that little secret but then when it actually does she gets a bit scared.
the writing was good again and i'll be waiting for the next chapter on this one as well.
English
love it
I love your stories but the chapters are too short
More
Okay this was way too short, it needed to be longer!!!
****
Needs to be fleshed out more, and edited better. Four, for potential.
Love it!
Great start but the chapters could be longer and more background info needed.
Come back!
I like to see what happen between these two.
Good story
I like this kind of story. exciting and thrilling.
again a very nice chapter to start off with. i loved the little contrast in her feelings, she loved being pantyless when wearing a skirt, knowing very well there may always happen something to expose that little secret but then when it actually does she gets a bit scared.
the writing was good again and i'll be waiting for the next chapter on this one as well.
Alright
This was very hot from the beginning. More is needed to continue to fuel the fire that you have started.
Oh come on! You must write some more about how she comes in for coffee or he stalks her at the library... Anything!
umm
Waiting for another chapter
Still Waiting...
You did a great job of setting this up. It's a shame you just abandoned the story after that.
Update
now please?
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