I really do hope this is fiction, because if it isn't, then you certainly need some professional help lady.
As I have said before I enjoy consensual humilation and righteous revenge.
But this isn't either, it's just some nasty woman releasing her anger on her innocent brother and getting her revenge for a failed marriage, and if this is what floats her boat, then I can imagine why her husband divorced her in the first place.
Shakes head...pity, the writing was fairly good, how about turning your talents to something more constructive and entertaining next time?
Even though her brother's penis was "small," it was certainly bigger than her "penis." Freud would say she was so fixated on it, she must have been jealous! It was also clear that her nurse's training lacked instruction in compassion, love, and empathy, as she clearly lacked these feelings in her family relationships.
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Anonymous09/09/10
Almost Sorry
Almost sorry to say I liked the story since the protagonist was a decidely unlikeable person. Yet, despite this, i have to give you props as it was pretty well written. Agree with the other commenters as well - if this is even remotely real, get professional help!
This could have been better! More details, please! This is more of an outline. I hope in the future you will let the story rest for a day or two and then add more details, more dialogue, in depth descriptions of each characters feelings and reactions. then let it rest and add more until you have a fully developed story!
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Anonymous01/08/12
I liked it! I feel so bad for the poor brother, but I'd like to know what happens! Agreeing with 0ra11yfix8ed, a little more detail and it will be perfect!
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Anonymous09/03/12
fffffffffffff
what a bitch you are. I WOULD FUCK UR FUCKING ASS CUNT.
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Anonymous09/03/12
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That comment revealed exactly why only some of us write! Illiteracy is more common than we think.
English
With a sister like you
I'm glad I'm an only child.
I really do hope this is fiction, because if it isn't, then you certainly need some professional help lady.
As I have said before I enjoy consensual humilation and righteous revenge.
But this isn't either, it's just some nasty woman releasing her anger on her innocent brother and getting her revenge for a failed marriage, and if this is what floats her boat, then I can imagine why her husband divorced her in the first place.
Shakes head...pity, the writing was fairly good, how about turning your talents to something more constructive and entertaining next time?
Agree with Mandy01
Even though her brother's penis was "small," it was certainly bigger than her "penis." Freud would say she was so fixated on it, she must have been jealous! It was also clear that her nurse's training lacked instruction in compassion, love, and empathy, as she clearly lacked these feelings in her family relationships.
Almost Sorry
Almost sorry to say I liked the story since the protagonist was a decidely unlikeable person. Yet, despite this, i have to give you props as it was pretty well written. Agree with the other commenters as well - if this is even remotely real, get professional help!
I liked it...
Don't worry about negative comments. You can always delete them!
For a sequel, how about he tries to get even with you?
Short & Sweet
This could have been better! More details, please! This is more of an outline. I hope in the future you will let the story rest for a day or two and then add more details, more dialogue, in depth descriptions of each characters feelings and reactions. then let it rest and add more until you have a fully developed story!
I liked it! I feel so bad for the poor brother, but I'd like to know what happens! Agreeing with 0ra11yfix8ed, a little more detail and it will be perfect!
fffffffffffff
what a bitch you are. I WOULD FUCK UR FUCKING ASS CUNT.
ffffffffffffffffffffff??
That comment revealed exactly why only some of us write! Illiteracy is more common than we think.
Hottest story here, more maybe?
It is possible ...
To see why a man divorced her .
Like it.
Hope you write again soon sweetie, don't let the anti-female 'anonymous' commentators get you down x
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