Their Unholy Love

Jesus

So hot and intense. Beautiful spare language: not a word wrong. I was there, I was her. I felt the leather and knew his love.

Amazing

Lovely emotive words as always, I really felt I was there and was her. Felt every lash of that lovely leather.

A curious thing

A long time ago a friend remarked, in the midst of a politely undetailed, mostly theoretical conversation about Top/bottom relationships, that "the bottom is the point of control." I understood the theory.

This story sheds some light on the reality. Not least because of the way my body is reacting to it.

Phenomenally well done.

just wow

Took me somewhere I've always wanted to go. Intensely arousing, beautifully written. Soaking

The sacred and the profane...

...what an unholy mix. Your writing is better than it's ever been: tight and yet revealing. You're so incredibly talented. No words to express my justified admiration. No words. You keep on improving every time you post, and from now...the sky's the limit. Go for it, Scotsman.

Beautifully written

As always. I am becoming a fast follower of your writing. Bdsm is your best genre in my opinion. This story was a turn on but also pays homage to the suggestive sub. Shows truly who is really in charge and who is being pushed. Absolutely wonderful, I await your next story. Thanks for the heads up on this one, would not have wanted to miss it!

Wonderful writing and wordplay

I've never read a BDSM story before, since consensual physical violence doesn't turn me on, but since you are one of favourite authors, I had to read it.

And I'm glad I did. As ever, the tightness of your writing and your love of wordplay is a source of joy.

Bravo!

I really really liked it! Your best yet. Thank you for letting me know it's here.

Almost speechless

While I don't pretend to undertand the acts presented here, I always appreciate the way you tell a story. This was no different. Your talent is so great, and you never cease to amaze me.

longing, loving, awakening.

Mysterious rites

Like transubstantiation, the gift of pain---for both receiver and inflicter---defies comprehension. Only the orgasmic reaction verifies that the mystery has taken place. Your story illuminates the enigma.

Unholy?

I think holy, and holier than anything else you've written. This is so exciting. It makes me lust for such experience of love, pain, and exchange. Her refusal is so hot and his response even more. The is a raw and sexy beautiful story.

Who's in charge?

I like the powerplay here. She has something he really really wants and it adds a dimension to this scene that I haven't quite read before. He seems so desperate, far more than she. I *love* the part where his saying "please" revealed his weakness. Very crafty.

Nicely done

Although I dont claim to know a lot about this kinda thing, I really like the way the story is told :) good writing.

Enjoyed it

I liked the build up and the taut, spare writing. Also loved the word choices.

Impressed

I'm deeply impressed by your work. You have explored here a theme that intrigues me terribly; the psychology of the relationship between the Dom and the sub.

Amazing!

This has

always been a fantasy of mine :)

So glad you like it pleaseabuseme.

It's set in Queensland.

My new woman has just read this...

and though it scared her, it didn't frighten her away.