All Comments on 'Sex on the Beach'

Well written, sensual, erotic and quite beautiful. What a fine fantasy to take my mind off of the ending of the summer.

Short, sharp and beautiful.

Thank you.

hp

Everything in the right measure and the imagry brought it to life.

Let me be blunt. This is great jack off material.

Rare for two strangers to share such a fantasy for the first time. Usually it's an experienced person showing another the ropes.

You're missing a paragraph [or something] of exposition telling us the history of the stranger with the narrator. Other than that, it flows beautifully.

Tee hee! "Flow." Wetness. Hee!

It may have been a pretty short story cause I would have loved to hear more, but that was just incredible. They both sound so sexy and much like a wonderful couple. They were just made for each other. Thank you soooo much and keep it up.

This story was so hoy and sexy it had my pussy dripping wet and me cumming so hard after fingering my pussy reading this

She tells this encounter story so well you feel you are there watching and the arousal factor is amazing!